To:

Young James R. Anderson The Innocent,

From:

Old James T. LaFond, Thought Criminal,

As I wrote #0.1, introducing the theme

I take it your #0.2, Sinko Domingo, I think it is, introduces our action hero, Executive Agent Neil Dare.

After this introduction of the theme, it is important for us to have an easy flow. My bad guy, Will White, does bad things. Your good guy, Neil Dare, tries to bring him to justice. The key to Will’s nefarious criminal enterprise, as a terrible racist, will be to set up safe houses for his criminal associates whereto incubate their hate. I will time stamp Will White’s chapters. At the bottom of each will be an actual address with a real estate listing for Neil’s investigation. As described below, certain of these safe houses are so deeply cloaked that there will not be enough information for them to be revealed by investigation, in this, Book 1.

Those locations where activities are described that will reveal them to the investigator will end with a masculine—Mdash! I will leave the next day or two clear for Neil Dare’s bust. Bust and clue chapters are assigned in the outline below. This enables both writers to get the weather and any news information of the day, correct for the record. Our novel should be understood to have taken place in real time and space and to have involved an anonymous agency combating a cryptoterrorist entity not known to the public, or even to known agencies.

Will White #1 is Winter Wheat.

As explained below, Neil Dare, your Executive Agent, will not have the information available to solve Winter Wheat. This location involves part of Master White’s long game, to be uncovered in Book 2.

Neil Dare #1 Title?

In this chapter the reader, already empathetic to Neil’s plight, learns about the purpose and substance of the agency, hastily formed in a week by secret executive order. For some reason, 29 year old Neil, a combat and piracy specialist, has been assigned as lead investigator ahead of numerous older and more experienced men from various branches of the military and law enforcement. He is told that this was at the express pleasure of President Trump, who selected Neil as “Point Man,” for the Mid-Atlantic based on his masters degree in Medieval Maritime History with a specialty in the Viking Age.

Say what?

This makes him enemies right off. The agency, from what government organizations its 100 members have been drawn, and how they are organized and dispersed on American maritime borders, and even how they interact with other agencies, will be covered in the briefing. Studying Trump lately, I really like the idea of him bossing an agency head named Bill, for it will be easy for the King to sound sure and strident addressing a man by that name.

Will White #2 A Bitch Too Far

Will White Declares War on Trump and USG

This introduces another node in Will White’s terror network dedicated to his long game. This location may not be busted until Book 2. However, the chapter occurs simultaneously with Neil Dare’s #2, which I have outlined below and will assist in. It is also located in Virginia Beach, right across the harbor from The Agency’s base.

Neil Dare #2 Title?

This is a three part chapter, defining the agency in action and the story line.

#2: Part One

Subtitle?

Neil and his crew, with his supervisor, bust a tramp steamer, an old Turkish ship, hauling Ukrainian women to be trafficked out of The Port of Baltimore. One of the thugs must survive to stand trial.

#2: Part 2

Subtitle?

The trial is conducted in international waters, the accused chained to a diving sled or an anchor, whatever you think is more prosaic. The proceedings will not be marred by the amoral presence of lawyers or an activist judge. The trial will consist of the accused, secured to his means of descent, suspended from [a small crane?] or robotic arm, speaking with President Trump via a face time call on Neil’s phone. All are guilty unless they float, the dialogue of the Condemner in Chief entirely up to you.

#2: Part 3

Fabulous

This scene will consist of an after action discussion with Trump, Neil and Bill. Written by myself, Trump informs Neil and Bill of what they are up against and that he will always stand ready to take his leather shod foot out of the ass of whatever head of state or agency head he has just kicked, and even include abandoning the embrace of the Lovely First Lady, to take their call. This places the most entertaining president in history as a character in numerous chapters, as Young James the Innocent sees fit. The reason for time stamping the chapters are now obvious. I will now relegate myself to reversion to type and writing the bad guys.

The Balance of Will White’s Chapters, With Locations

to Be Time Stamped When Written

Sanctuary Rock

Being Will White #3

3507 White Chapel Rd, Baltimore, MD 21215 - Zillow

 www.zillow.com/homedetails/3507-White-Chapel-Rd-Baltimore-MD-21215/36497604_zpid/     2023-07-31T00:00:00.0000000

3507 White Chapel Rd, Baltimore MD, is a Single Family home that contains 2272 sq ft and was built in 1939.It contains 4 bedrooms and 4 bathrooms.This home last sold for $370,000 in July 2023. The Zestimate for this Single Family is $377,800, which has decreased by $1,400 in the last 30 days.The Rent Zestimate for this Single Family is $2,874/mo, which has increased by $2,874/mo in the last 30 ...

This will be a bust, which should require The Slam Dunk Crew.

OWG

Being Will White #4

White Oak, Pennsylvania - Wikipedia

 en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Oak,_Pennsylvania

White Oak is a borough in Allegheny County, Pennsylvania, United States. The population was 7,630 at the 2020 census. [3] It is a suburb of the Pittsburgh metropolitan area. White Oak was named for a stand of white oak trees near the original town site. [4]

This sets the stage for another low risk, long view operation to be busted in Book 2.

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Alien Agents

Being Will White #5

White River (Puyallup River) - Wikipedia

 en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_River_(Puyallup_River)

The White River is a white, glacial river in the U.S. state of Washington. It flows about 75 miles (121 km) from its source, the Emmons Glacier on Mount Rainier, to join the Puyallup River at Sumner. It defines part of the boundary between King and Pierce counties.

A bust which is so weird, the Slam Dunk Crew does not know what to do!

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Upward Bound

Being Will White #6

White Mountains (New England) - Wikipedia

 en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_Mountains_(New_England)

The White Mountains are a subrange of the Appalachian Mountains in New Hampshire and Maine, USA. They are the most rugged mountains in New England, with 48 peaks over 4,000 feet, alpine tundra, hiking trails, ski resorts, and scenic attractions.

A successful rescue of terror plot victims, who offer clues to Executive Agent Dare in his high speed hunt for the Real Cracker-ass Cracker Who Don’t Care

White of Way

Being Will White #7

3206 White Avenue, Baltimore, MD

This house I lived in for 8 years, and will describe for my co-writer. This will be the big bust for which Dare will need to make a Trump Call and get the mission for Book 2.

This should yield 16 chapters and 19 posts, with the second half of 2 in three parts, and including this as a final post. With the addition of this in the back of the book, I figure we end up with a short novel of 27,000 words by autumn, enough posts to fill out your site with regular serials for the rest of the year.

Now, I must go back and write Part 3 of Neil Dare #2, and scatter a maddeningly incomplete number of bad guy cracker crumbs at your good guy feet. I promise not to leave you with all of the heavy lifting like I did to Jeth with Vunak of Antares—though, Master Will S. White does possess an implacable, ahem… WILL.